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Feedback on "What Papa bear told baby bear?"

Guys,

I could not have asked for a better feedback. Please read below a mail from both my sisters kids. Adith is 7, Neel is 6 and Nanditha is 2 :)

I just loved what the 2 year old had to say!!! Horsie it is :)

Cheers,
Rohit



Hello Rohit Mama

We read the story. Here are our suggestions

1.After the baby bear asks a question at the end you should probably give Papa Bear`s answer .What did they do after they came back home ?
2.Can you make a funny story ? I love reading funny ones and mystery too...
3.Nanditha wants you to include a Horse in the story.

We liked your story very much ,It was really nice.
Love
Adith Neel and Nanditha
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2 comments:

Krithika Chandrashekar said...

I can contribute generously to a funny story with you as the hero :P

Angeline Jey Harin{AngelVana} said...

ur truly blessed chubs!!!!! real angels...ur family has always been an idol family to me..I pray everyday that God may keep blessing all of u abundantly...God bless :)

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